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28 December 2015 @ 03:52 pm
Fear Before the Fall P 9  
So here is the sketch for page 9. I like this one a lot. Here is the recap if you need it http://thagirion.livejournal.com/873110.html



Frame 1: Excuse me? How did you get in here?
Frame 2: Don't worry about it buddy.
Frame 3: Worry is what I do.
Frame 4: Now I really need to know how to leave.
Frame 5: Sorry. Rule 57....
Frame 6: You're going to tell me.
Frame 7. It's that panel over there! It leads to the central shaft! That leads to the 5 islands! Don't hurt me! Please make it stop! Make it stope!
Frame 8: Make what stop? Thank you for your cooperation. Let's uh...keep this to ourselves. Now run along.
Frame 9: Who are you again?
Frame 10: I'm Fear.

He's getting better at scaring. This guy spilled all the beans easily once Fear saw he was afraid of microbes. So giant amoeba it is to get him to talk.

I have the dialog all worked out for page 10 but having a hard time with the framing. Not sure how to go about it as there's some weird events and so far the next scene is very dialog intensive. I don't like that but it's one of those points in the story it can't be avoided.
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Des: Fearthagirion on December 29th, 2015 01:57 pm (UTC)
I love that. He realized just who it was he was dealing with and it could have been a lot worse. Yes. I think a lot of these protein workers would fear bacteria and diseases as they are part of keeping the brain working properly.
I love how he's adapting so quickly to his new powers. Scaring people is a great way to get information. His transformation is fast for sure. That INTP nature also makes him funny and liking to tell jokes or play pranks like this. Something I forgot to mention on my journal about him. I have a theory that the TP combination is the joke generator in many personalities as ENTP and ESTP's are this way too. They like to kid around. Hence the "Make what stop?" It's funny and cold at the same time since we know he knows what he's talking about.
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gamma_wings: YouTube Hawkgamma_wings on December 29th, 2015 09:54 pm (UTC)
Haha I love this page, I'm so looking forward on seeing it coloured. Interesting that he's afraid of microbes, and that an amoeba was shown. That reminded me of those brain eating amoebas and how a protein may be afraid of those. I love how Fear managed to scared him into giving him the answer. And I also really love the expressions, especially of Fear, who looks so smug and confident.
Des: Fearthagirion on December 30th, 2015 12:09 am (UTC)
Hey good to see you here. I have a long way to go before I get to this page. Currently inking page 7. But yeah this is a good one. Funny you should mention those as Giant Microbes makes Brain Eating Amoebas and I did have those in mind. It was a great fear to take advantage of. I love how Fear just swept the floor with him. Now he's finally starting to get recognition. Before no one knew who he was. Have you seen the other pages?