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30 August 2015 @ 07:53 am
Fear Before the Fall P. 4  
I got another page finished. I'm rather happy with this one not only for the art but for what happens.

Frame 1: This wasn't a time to be afraid. Just cautious.
Frame 2: To have panicked now would have been just as bad as to have over reacted in anger.
Frame 3: WHAT?!
Frame 4: I'm sorry! I didn't mean...
Frame 5: (thinking) Wait a Minute!
Frame 6: (Thinking) Not this time. Not ever again.

So the insert of frame 5 is very important and the turning point. I love that that's when he gets over his own fear and stands up for himself. Saying he's sorry never works and only gets him beat up. And he wasn't insulting Anger himself so there was no need for him to get attacked. I love that he dodged the punch. I thought about having Anger say, "Don't dodge!" Or something like that. Think I should add that? And then we have Fear's first transformation into his freaky evil Fear form. In case you can't tell the background majorly changed when he did. Will be obvious when colored. But now he's inside Anger's mind.

Current Mood: Pleased
badcowboy: wtfbadcowboy on August 30th, 2015 01:05 pm (UTC)
Whoa! I am loving this so much! I LOVE how when Fear is saying about reacting in anger, and there's Anger's little head peeking over the consol like HEY! Just awsome :D This is just awesome and I love reading it. Hell, I'm liking this and it's just pencils at the moment. I'm sure I'll die over the finished product! Hmmm not a good idea though...if I die then I can't continue to read har har har. This kicks solid ass. I love the expressions. Great graet job wow.
Des: Fearthagirion on August 30th, 2015 01:13 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like it. Yeah I love drawing Anger's one eye in a lot of these frames. He's so short. And it wasn't a personal attack what Fear said. He's totally right. I need to reword it though to say "To have panicked in fear would have been as bad...." Talking about how he use to over react. But Anger takes it the wrong way and looks for any excuse to try and punch him. Not anymore. He's finally had enough. The last punch knocked these powers into him. I think you'll liked the colored version. So different from Renegade that's so dark and mostly at night. This will be very pretty I'm sure. Ah if you like these expressions you'll love the ones I'm working on. I have 24 drawn so far.
badcowboybadcowboy on August 30th, 2015 03:00 pm (UTC)
Can't wait then!!!
Desthagirion on August 31st, 2015 12:20 pm (UTC)
Finished the 35th yesterday. Hey I see you have a new default icon and you added new ones.
badcowboy: egobadcowboy on August 31st, 2015 02:14 pm (UTC)
Ah...yes indeed. The default icon is one I use on everything so it HAD to be here. The others were me messing around learning...trying to figure out emotions where pictures would work and going through things that reflect me. Some of the House MD ones I had as Yahoo icons so they worked perfectly. I'm learning this at least. I'm dangerous with knowledge like this, but fortunately I can only have 15 icons otherwise I'm sure I'd be going insane with them.
Desthagirion on August 31st, 2015 04:38 pm (UTC)
Yeah it's a shame you only get 15. I don't think it's worth it to get a paid account here anymore. I forget how many you get per year and if you keep renewing the number keeps going up each year. They used to give permanent accounts ages ago. They were $200 for life. I got one so my icon limit will always increase. Right now I have 189 of 229. But 15 is pretty crappy.
badcowboy: boredbadcowboy on August 31st, 2015 05:15 pm (UTC)
Yeah. Fifteen is boring, but I guess for me at this time and place it's enough. Odd number though, should have been twenty. Oh well. Thanks for the tip on how to make them I think I got it down pretty good.
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Des: Fearthagirion on August 31st, 2015 12:28 pm (UTC)
Yes it is. No more coward and taking stuff when he doesn't deserve it. No more sorry when he wasn't wrong. Hehe yes that question has been brought up on youtube a lot. Do the emotions have emotions in their heads? It would go on forever so it's a huge flaw in this whole universe. I need to talk about some of the funny flaws I have noticed. This particular Anger does over react way too much. The comment was a general true statement and not aimed at him. Fear was enjoying some rare praise but that didn't last long because Anger got offended. It's good he realized this. I did love the times in the movie when he was clam. I know he's the comic relief but would have been nicer if he weren't that way. "Hey, don't dodge!" is good because he's always been able to hit him with no problems. He thinks that's what supposed to happen each time. He's in for a big surprise.
Samantha Falcosamanthafalco on September 1st, 2015 12:41 am (UTC)
Whoa! This is awesome. I love the cliffhanger effect in the last panel.
I love how these pages are so neat even though they're just in pencil now. My pencil work always has eraser marks, haha. This is going to look amazing colored. The expressions are really great, too. It's seriously like how Pixar would have done them.
Desthagirion on September 1st, 2015 02:36 am (UTC)
Thank you. Yeah, when that one gets colored everyone will be like "What happens next?" Aw thanks. I use a white eraser because all others are terrible and leave smudges. And I erase a lot. In fact here's what I use.

I hope I can start to color these pages soon. I've started on the cover and it's going to be a hard one. I love the expressions on these characters. Just so fun to do. I do my best to draw them on model and make them look like authentic to the movies.