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26 August 2015 @ 08:39 pm
Fear Before the Fall P 3  
Ok here is page 3. Wasn't too happy with the looks of this at first but I managed to save it at the end. You can tell what panels I was having an off day.



Here's the text.

Frame 1: Joy: The day's almost over. Why don't you turn in? Don't worry. I don't think we'll need you.
Frame 2:Fear: (Thinking) I think the visions have stopped. My head hurts and I'm tired. But I think after some sleep things will be better.
Frame 3: The Following morning. Yes. I can feel today will be much better.
Frame 4: (thinking) What the? I can see everyone's fears. And I feel less afraid myself? Am I broken? He must have hit my head really hard this time.
Frame 5: Fear thinking: I'm really starting to enjoy this.
Joy or Disgust: Fear? Is this a safety issue? Should you do something?
Fear: Huh? Oh yeah.
Frame 6: Fear: There, no problem.
Joy: Wow. Was that the right thing to do?
Disgust: Yeah. Usually you're panicked in a situation like this.

So Fear has gotten used to his powers, what he knows of them so far, and has gained quite a bit of confidence. Last page was probably the last time you'll see him so comically scared. Ok well I will have to flip him in frame 2 because this looks terrible with him facing the same way in each one. I don't know why I did that and didn't notice. So that might help a bit. Frame 1 looks boring and empty but perhaps will be better once colored. I like frame 2 a lot and think that I managed to make quality art again in 5 and 6. Yes I love 6 with that crazy perspective. Plus Anger haha. Also, Fear doesn't need glowing eyes to look frightening and cool. Oh and I hate drawing Joy. She's so hard and she's ugly.

Current Mood: Accomplished
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audes_ljaudes_lj on August 27th, 2015 10:21 am (UTC)
Starting to hit in with logical decisions it seems. And the boost in confidence certainly is something that will make the following pages pretty nice and also now with that last panel, while Anger is not very impressed... for the time being. Give it a tidal wave and that will change.
Des: Fearthagirion on August 27th, 2015 11:52 am (UTC)
Yes he is. Starting to show the confidence in his expression and not so insecure all the time. Yeah, Anger's definitely not impressed. Heh, that's coming.
Samantha Falcosamanthafalco on August 28th, 2015 01:38 am (UTC)
Good job on this. I don't think it's bad. Ugh Joy is proving to be a nightmare for me to draw. Fear and Anger are the easiest so far. I'm trying to do what you did with Chris' emotions.
Desthagirion on August 28th, 2015 02:31 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Yes she's so hard and annoying to draw. I don't know why. Yeah I find them pretty easy. Same with Disgust. I didn't draw the next page yet but I'm working on his 35 expressions and a new ID which will be nice.
badcowboy: wtfbadcowboy on August 28th, 2015 11:43 am (UTC)
Oooooh I'm really liking this! I looooooove the perspective on the last panel. Heck, I like these how they are so I know I'll drop dead loving them when they're colored. This is fun and exciting! Got my own cowgirl Joy probably jumping around in my head shooting her pistols up in the air like in those cliche westerns lol Yeehah!
Des: Fearthagirion on August 28th, 2015 01:05 pm (UTC)
Aw thanks. I really wanted to do that one like the camera was place on the console. Still have to draw in all the buttons. Luckily I found a great over head ref. I'm curious what these will be like myself once colored. I have an idea but never know until something is done. I'm so glad you're excited. HA, I can imagine your Joy doing that.